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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 16:54:33 GMT
last night i dreamt i saw you
the sunshine in my life
i woke and reached out for you
the pain cuts like a knife
you are by my side no longer
but an angel heard my tears
and now i feel much stronger
and know im not to blame
this angel reached out to me
and wiped my tears away
and with his tiny hand in mine
i turn to face another day
well i dont know where that came from but its about my relationship with my son and his dad. what do you think?
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Post by sarajay28 not logged on Sept 8, 2006 16:59:33 GMT
Awww Caz,
that is so lovely, thank you for sharing that very personal poem with us.
Sarah.xxx
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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 17:01:50 GMT
thanx, i just felt it so i got it down quick!!
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Post by clarabelle on Sept 8, 2006 17:17:18 GMT
It's a lovely poem Caz.
xxx
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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 17:20:12 GMT
thanx x
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Post by cheshire on Sept 8, 2006 17:59:40 GMT
It's lovely Caz and really personal - so thanks for sharingxx Hx
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kl77
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Post by kl77 on Sept 8, 2006 19:22:22 GMT
Hi Caz
Amazing and touching, thanks
KL X
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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 19:31:40 GMT
do you really think its amazing? wow im really flattered, thanx  |
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naomi
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Post by naomi on Sept 8, 2006 20:22:41 GMT
Thank you Caz for sharing this beautiful poem - the words really speak a depth of feelng, and somehow you've managed to convey a wonderful sense of hope in the midst of the pain and loneliness at times.
I think poetry can be such a helpful way of expressing all the conflicting emotions with PNI. Well done, it's beautiful...
Peace to you,
Nay xx
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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 20:33:19 GMT
thank you naomi its nice to hear such lovely feedback. if the mood takes me that way again i shall write it all down. im glad ive given a feeling of hope too x
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Post by yoyo on Sept 8, 2006 20:42:11 GMT
Aww that is SO lovely - really hit the nerve with me, I think many of us can relate to those sentiments - I think you're right, maybe your soul is beginning to heal Really lovely. |
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Post by cazfletcher on Sept 8, 2006 20:44:45 GMT
thanx |
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